Before The Rain Comes In

Before The Rain Comes In.

Storm clouds were predicted; were gathering;

I decided to mow my lawn

before the rain came in.

I like to be that organised,

to plan ahead,

according to climate fluctuations.

And my lawn is always neat

and well-tended.

It is a pity one cannot predict

women just as well!

 

31/07/14

Reviews

[Frieda P]

Seriously, you're comparing women's minds to your lawn care?!! Sorry, that struck me as so funny...everything is falling into place now. ;)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Ha the seeds of doubt and all that!

[Frieda P]

Can I peek inside your head just once? !

[John Alexander McFadyen]

My Lady you have lived there so many times!

[Frieda P]

You're going to start rumors on the cafe John you know how that goes!

[Sunny]

very different way to describe a women's mind, and yet its still somewhat accurate. nicely done :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you so much Sunny.

[Sunny]

You're very welcome! :)

[Linda alexander]

Some poet said the wind can change direction similar to the way women may change their minds, so well said poet, it is hard to predict the women's minds, enjoyed the poem

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Linda, straight from the horse's mouth.

[Linda alexander]

You welcome but there are always many sides to the story, take care

[John Alexander McFadyen]

I know, and I am not anti women, honest!

[Linda alexander]

I am neutral and open to both genders in general about their agendas, all depends on individuals and their ability to cope sometimes, at times it is mere arrogance too

[John Alexander McFadyen]

I agree and write mere emotions of the moment.