your verses drip from your lips

your verses drip from your lips like crystals,

tinkling slurry syllables hushing all others,

silencing meadows, springtime airs,

priming my atmosphere awaiting your arrival.

Reviews

[Lyn Anderson]

Once again, you have written one each woman secretly hopes is about her. How very astute of you ...

[m.s.early]

(: Oh KL, you're too kind. Thank you :)

[Linda alexander]

silencing meadows, springtime airs,
elegant, genuine, and warm welcome for her verses which can silence meadows and spring time airs, you have natural talent for poetry which can be revealed in these lines

[m.s.early]

(: thank you linda. talent is a blessing. a muse is too :)

[Linda alexander]

well said, take care

[Frieda P]

Oh I do love this, really really do....every line is exquisite,..

'tinkling slurry syllables hushing all others'

...oh my, now that's some poetry! Outstanding, you fit heaps of emotion in four succinct lines xavier.

[m.s.early]

(: thank you so much Frieda. i'm glad you enjoyed this one :)

[Frieda P]

It spoke to me, must have been those lips ;-)