the pilot of my brain

the pilot of my brain

is dropping bombs like me

onto innocent victims like you

intentionally

Reviews

[DaughterNature]

So, are these bombs destructive, disruptive, or meant to "blow our minds" (ha ha)? Perhaps a little of all 3? I like how ambiguity plays into the interpretation here -- but are we, your readers, so innocent?

[Sugar Plum ♥]

So sweet, even makes me feel calm that this bombs are common in mind of men...(?) bombs are always specialty of men. and "innocent victims" remain played from women, so suitable expressions. :)

:: n.nour ::

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

seems appropriate....my day wouldn't be complete without a lil damage control!LOL

[Rita L. Sev]

A brief piece that speaks volumes.

[s y e]

Short and to the point. I loved the analogies in this.

[Mockingbird]

brings to mind someone barraging someone else with the truth they don't want to hear for the person's benefit.

[Sami Khalil]

Cleverly written but with great analogies...Thank you for these packed poetic bombs...:)..............

[Linda alexander]

Yes, writing throw bombs at you to think so deep, for good I may say,it is better to get bombed with information, questions, truths, and outcome for another similar situations, better to thing rather than making the brain a cottage cheese after some time and kill the days rather than to live and dream, clever write, impressed

[Lyn Anderson]

Sweet short and to the point. Well, not so sweet, really, but great.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and the poems hit the ground of minds and explode...and we all run for cover.