The Locksmith!!

All I need is just

One full turn.

For only when I

Release her skeleton lock

Of love on finding

The skeleton key;

Will I be........

The locksmith of love.

Reviews

[Jane Taylor Hardy]

Love the play on words with the "skeleton key".....it is always a joy to read poetry that seems fun and light and very creative but is masquerading.... because underneath it is a true and deep philosophical write.

[andrew mitchell]

Yes mystical is the skeleton key as is the skeleton lock but somehow somewhere lies the truth with the mysteries of human attraction! Thank you Jane for your nice review

[sereenaoutloud]

love this, sometimes we lock our hearts aways to protect ourselves... it takes a very special someone to not only find the lock but have the correct key to open it!! :)
love this metaphor !!

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you kind lady!

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the lock is always visible but that key, well, that's another story... but, if we can find the key and are given opportunity to release those bony skeletons taking up space in that damaged heart, there may be hope for love to flourish... nice job, my friend

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks for your review as always FT

[Linda alexander]

Genuine footing on how real love happens, becoming that particular lock smith is all that matters, variant precise and great presentation

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Linda for your great words and thanks for dropping by

[Linda alexander]

You welcome

[Sami Khalil]

What a provocative thought . What a wonderful poem. Brilliant. ....:)....

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you kind Sir Sami

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome, sir Mitchell...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

some people are hard to open, once they have been severely hurt.

they lock themselves away, and lock love out...imprisoned in their own protective custody.

[andrew mitchell]

Well said Jacob and true for some as I mend the damage from others before me in relationships

[John Alexander McFadyen]

All royalties to Moi please for planting this one in your mind Andrew! That locksmith looks like he could be a busy chap turning keys all day. Interesting little ditty with your thought processes stamped all over it!

[andrew mitchell]

Find the trigger find the mark lol and so they should go to you lol Thanks John Your poem takes all the credits!!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Oh hardly, I only 'unlocked' the idea in that convoluted and creative mind of yours Andrew!