Untitled and unfinished from long ago

The Dragon's shape has faded.
Gone the way of Odin and the giant.
I can barely recall the Angel.
Summoned the Demon burns only slightly.
Shapeless, like before and between.
The memories of the panther and the path.

Reviews

[abbypullanlitandpoetry]

Really love this. The way you've captured that fading of mythic memory is haunting. Dragon to demon to nothing is a strong arc, and that "before and between" bit is particularly evocative. The panther and path at the end leaves you wanting more in the best way. Short but packs a punch. The whole thing feels like half remembered dreams slipping away. Brilliant stuff. Well done. AP x.

[Fishysua]

Thank you
I feel like this doesn’t really have enough to it
I think from Dark to Black does most of it better

[Neha agrawal]

This reads like a fragment of myth remembered in a dream — haunting, poetic, and steeped in quiet loss.

[Fishysua]

Thank you
It still feels too little to me