Go If You Dare

The empty waves~ 

that hollow stare

these deep black caves

go if you dare

and I'm

waiting~

wanting~

needing~

haunting~

You

and making mistakes that are hard to correct 

and correcting the past

as I sit and reflect~

and I wonder if it's too late

to find what was lost

is this my fate

how much did it cost

Reviews

[Linda alexander]

and I wonder if it's too late
to find what was lost
is this my fate
how much did it cost

Powerful and great write, the truth about decisions we can not have two decisions same time, the baseline is that if we take the ownership of our decisions it is easier for us to keep moving forward irrespective of which decisions we made finally, liked it

[audrie]

Oh, how I would like nothing more than to not get caught up in my past decisions. I find myself wondering about the "what ifs" more as I get over. The thought of my life is only half over gives me the comfort of knowing that I have so many more choices left to make in my life =- surely I have learned some lessons for future choices. Thanks for taking the time to read this

[Linda alexander]

You welcome, take care

[nseddy]

and I wonder if it's too late
to find what was lost
is this my fate
how much did it cost

Very moving poem thanks for sharing.

[audrie]

I find myself weighing out my life decisions and wondering if certain choices were made for the better but then I have to stop myself and move out of that mindset because I would go crazy - - - thanks for the review - meant a lot!

[A. Amos]

Your poem reminds me Justify my love by Madonna:)

[audrie]

I can totally see that - cool - glad you enjoyed it!

[Saddam]

and making mistakes that are hard to correct
and correcting the past
as I sit and reflect~

A well write and placed poetry. I like it much.

[audrie]

I'm glad you enjoyed it - thanks for the review!

[BlueDreams]

WOW! Its a great poem :) A powerful starting made it even better to proceed to read with interest.. :) Awesome :)

[audrie]

I'm glad you enjoyed it - this is one of my favorite poems - I find it short and powerful as apposed to complex and drawn out. . . thanks for the read!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome. I always enjoy your poetry.

[BlueDreams]

Anytime welcome :)

[Coyote Poetry]

"waiting~
wanting~
needing~
haunting~"
Some payments are not known till it is too late. The ending was true. Cost of mistakes can leave us in a mess. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[audrie]

my pleasure! you have highlighted my favorite part of the poem as well - glad you enjoyed