Invisibles

The invisibles still have feelings,

the weak still have feelings.

Though they might not say anything,

they all still notice.

Though the world is moving fast,

they catch every detail.

Though they may not do something,

they still have feelings for you

Reviews

[Ruth]

Those who seem so always capture more of life than those who do not observe and feel and notice...I like the personal finale to this, emotively done x

[Author Unknown]

I like the sentimental paradox of your piece . Sort of reminded of that cute but corny song video by Taylor Swift You belong with me . We do sometimes look the world around us and the people who cares and matters in adifferent pair of lenses . We only see and perceive the very obvious . The real beauty of the person is and was sometimes hidden and obscured .Just my take

[Sue Hart]

Get on a highway and you become invisible. The weak are at the mercy of others, and they notice plenty, often because the power is not theirs to change the cruelty. They catch every detail and their feelings are true. Excellent poem and you can see where my mind went. We're in a soup bowl of manipulation.

[Scott Metro]

Interesting subject matter....


Scott

[Linda alexander]

well said, so can we put all these poets who are really feeling for the world in that category too, it is a naked reality ignoring the weak, even if they contribute much in silent way
catching every detail is an active function of mind, that trait is an extension of caring, the the world is so empty in general because there is extreme deficiency in caring, so these invisible and weak are relevant, one strong chain depends how strong the weakest link is
Though the world is moving fast,
they catch every detail.

[Kai Rollins]

Ahh so here it is it seems. Been quite a while hasn't it?

[Brittany Zedalis]

This is very touching. I like it.