Sailing on Uncharted Waters

.. magma, hunter, peach, scarlet, leverage, appendage, laveer found on dictionary.com, implode I want this to be a positive poem about love and sex.

Love Poem

 

 

He laveered his vessel to leward, tacking ever so seductively, slippery sliding across her dock...positioning his appendage in the scarlet channel.

Wafting haze of her peach scented bath oils smells of chrysanthemums igniting the liquid magma of her desires of volcanic proportions...

He the hunter executing his leverage as the dominant, slowly and skillfully...

 

imploding.

 

Reviews

[joshua deathdealer]

Amazing poetry!! All the way around.

[Moriarty]

BEAUTIFUL!!!!
one of the BEST pieces i have ever read...i love every word of this piece...awesome....awesome...awesome...

[emmajoy]

An incredible marriage of two powerful activitie - battling the sea and the crazed play of bodies .. incredible sensual in the cleverest of ways!

[Rene Velez]

excellent poem, great images and wording, I like the picture..

[anne p. murray- LadeeAn..]

You wrote eroticism here with your use of imagery and metaphors. I've always said the difference between porn and eroticism are emotion and empathy. Porn elicits emotions for a raw need to screw, where eroticism elicits and exhibits respect for the characters.
This is delicate and sensual... you focused on feelings and emotions which in my opinion is much more erotic than sexual bluntness and the use of bluntly naming body parts

[Sunni Davis]

Amazingly sensual and sweetly erotic! Brilliantly written, my friend!

[Poetic Beauty]

I like all the lines and the way you worded them

[Poetic Beauty]

This is sensual and I love the play on words in this piece. it is bold but not in your face bold. It is beautiful and masculine. I don't have one favorite line.