Walk without becoming a victim

Walk without becoming a victim

A Poem by Linda alexander

She was walking through the silence of the beautiful green meadow
The daffodils were waving their heads fully welcoming her
The blue jays seemed really content, did not even fly in to the sky as if they scared
She was very comfortable and enjoying the beautiful partially sunny weather
She was walking with confidence too, as she was totally content with her
She is even in harmony with the nature, even with fragile scary blue jays
There stood few shadows on the very lower level of the meadow
Yes, surprisingly those shadows were similar to her called humans
She looked at those shadows with a totally strange face
It was so hard to even visualize to be in harmony with those shadows
It was living human shadows too, acting as lifeless dead souls
They were trying hard to transform humans to materialistic machines
They invited her too, yes a very genuine but cold invitation
She was way smarter than those shadows, no way she wants to be another victim
She kept on walking, left the shadows in the same exact place she met at the first time
She continued journey to  meet at least few shadows with life
She simply walked very casually, enjoying the breeze already kissing her

© 2014 Linda alexander


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Very good imagery, I can see her walking through the field and enjoying nature while having to be wary of other humans motivations, their thoughts can me more scary than a blue jays. "Stay out of the shadows for you no not what lurks there" but don't go trough life being afraid of shadows, sometimes they'll cool you off on a hot day

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Linda alexander

11 Years Ago

Thank you for the positive review, you can make me laugh that means I like your reviews I guess, no .. read more



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Very good imagery, I can see her walking through the field and enjoying nature while having to be wary of other humans motivations, their thoughts can me more scary than a blue jays. "Stay out of the shadows for you no not what lurks there" but don't go trough life being afraid of shadows, sometimes they'll cool you off on a hot day

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Linda alexander

11 Years Ago

Thank you for the positive review, you can make me laugh that means I like your reviews I guess, no .. read more
I can really feel this poem come to live. Great job.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Linda alexander

11 Years Ago

Thank you for the nice review, I am so excited that someone says those words about my poems, really .. read more
Very imaginative. Naturally splendid...I enjoyed it alot...:).......................

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Linda alexander

11 Years Ago

Yes, we can, yes we will
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

Yes we will...:).......................

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Added on January 20, 2014
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Linda alexander
Linda alexander

New Hyde Park, NY



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I am a writer and I used to write since I was nineteen years old. I grew up in a house with huge library. I read some of those books to be accurate I will say very few. I saw individuals reading day a.. more..