The oak tree, the moon , they silently witnessed

There stood the oak tree sensing all the transmitted waves of his and her thoughts

The oak tree with real emotions I am talking about

The blue jays were even discussing about the relation between two

How dare those little fragile birds have the nerve to do that

The moon was calm, quiet, simply absorbing the warmth of the thoughts passing by

The stars winked at the moon through her left eye

The moon thought I missed it, no way I got the full depth of it

We all stayed there in harmony, how marvelous

I wish those moments pass by more frequently

Reviews

[m.s.early]

the title caught my attention initially.

this is the first of yours i've read. the verses are as poignant as the title. a banding of nature's silent thoughts revealed in a unique narrative. it leaves me the curiosity of wondering the species of the narrator. if human, how lovely the sensitivity of recognizing nature's language.

the moon is an elder statesmen, knowing much, but saying little. and the stars so many trillions of years in age they share that ancient wisdom. blue jays confined to living but mere moments compared to the stellar beings gossip in galactic immaturity. humbly the narrator clues us that she too understood with what i took to be a wisdom beyond her years maybe.

thank you for sharing this with us :)

[Linda alexander]

Thank you very much for the splendid review, nature always attracted me, humans and nature in real harmony, that is beyond poetry can reach

[rayn]

Linda this poem is awesome! I like the use of the metaphors, human vs. nature!

[Linda alexander]

Thank you very much for the kind review, glad you enjoyed, take care

[poulina]

you truly do enjoy the serenity of the night and have captured it beautifully. the personas were insightful. keep up the good work!

[Linda alexander]

Thank you very much for your nice and positive review, thank you for stopping by, take care

[Sami Khalil]

I like how you personified the oak tree and how nature is alive with all other elements...Bravo......................

[Linda alexander]

Thank you so much for the review, glad you liked it

[Sami Khalil]

I did...You are welcome...:)......................

[WatcherInSilence]

Very simple, eloquent and enjoyable to read. Beautifully written!

[Linda alexander]

Thank you for the great review, I humbly accept your rich words in you review, thanks again