There is no me without you

There is no me without you

A Poem by Linda alexander

You are mine, yes a part of mine
There is no me without you
I will be like an empty sky without any stars or moon
I will be like a meadow without any greenery or blue jays
I will be like a seashore without any embracing beautiful waves
I will be like a desperate singer without any vocal chords
I will be like a sad poet without any poems or poetry
You are mine, yes a part of mine
There is no me without you 

© 2014 Linda alexander


Author's Note

Linda alexander
Hopefully you will stay with me to make me complete

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This is so touching. Everyone needs someone who will make him/her complete...because it's perfect to be "me and you" or "you and I".

Nice use of simile here. Great!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Linda alexander

11 Years Ago

Well said, thank you very much for the review, glad to know you liked the simile in the poem
Dhaye

11 Years Ago

Only few use that literary device. You made justice in using it here. =)
You're welcome.
Linda alexander

11 Years Ago

Thank you again, take care
We strive for completeness in love and marriage with the worthy other. This was so wonderful to share with us all...Bravo......................

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Linda alexander

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much for the review, really enjoying poetry, this field seems like a real call
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

Wow. Good to know...You are welcome...:)....................

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Linda alexander
Linda alexander

New Hyde Park, NY



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I am a writer and I used to write since I was nineteen years old. I grew up in a house with huge library. I read some of those books to be accurate I will say very few. I saw individuals reading day a.. more..