Animals kill a person for food, may be it is scared or by misunderstanding,the civilized humans do more barbarism universally compared to animals which is a real shame to humanity
I agree with your logic. Barbarians had changed little throughout history. Land, power and wealth is the goal of the Barbarians of today and yesterday. I like how you compared the animals to the humans. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
Thank you so much for the excellent review, there are few extras I doubt including ruining the gard.. read moreThank you so much for the excellent review, there are few extras I doubt including ruining the gardens of youth by own blood is beyond barbarism, that much downward spiral the world is going with lightening speed
I love poems that make me feel something, and this did. Beautiful title too
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11 Years Ago
Thank you so much for the review direct from heart, so glad to be among all of you talented ones who.. read moreThank you so much for the review direct from heart, so glad to be among all of you talented ones who won't fit for common society in general, society needs whom not sure anymore, take care
I agree with your logic. Barbarians had changed little throughout history. Land, power and wealth is the goal of the Barbarians of today and yesterday. I like how you compared the animals to the humans. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
Thank you so much for the excellent review, there are few extras I doubt including ruining the gard.. read moreThank you so much for the excellent review, there are few extras I doubt including ruining the gardens of youth by own blood is beyond barbarism, that much downward spiral the world is going with lightening speed
Emotion. Emotion is the difference, if it weren't for it , we'ed roam the earth sniffing each each others crotches to promulgate our species only. We would simply co-exist, in peace unless, of course, we get hungry. In that case, we'ed take what we could get to survive the day, not waste a thing and then go sleep and dream about a new day. We would not point an arrow or a gun or a bomb at one another.
We might, however,explore the universe simply because it's there (in big way, just look up). But no, we can't be or do any of these things because we are infested with emotion, GOD DAMN IT!
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11 Years Ago
Thank you for the wonderful review, well said, emotions play the most part, I feel arrogance, negati.. read moreThank you for the wonderful review, well said, emotions play the most part, I feel arrogance, negative ego, lack of appreciation, greediness, not having clue about how other species support the surrounding or conveniently forgetting for selfishness also contributes, better we should not be proud to be called as humans, take care
There are handful of people, definitely me not included who goes above and beyond, I know for sure, .. read moreThere are handful of people, definitely me not included who goes above and beyond, I know for sure, when God see them, may be partially think about some compromise, sent him an email already, so will let you know the exact answer, you have to wait some time, I do not think God is proud of us, take care
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I am patient
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Men in general do not possess that quality in general last four decades of observation, so really im.. read moreMen in general do not possess that quality in general last four decades of observation, so really impressed to find one who has patience, proud of you for that, take care
Indeed Linda. Truly barbarians. You present this truth in great poetry. Beasts are not capable of atrocity. Beasts are simple beasts, members of the food chain. With humans it is a choice to defy our divine nature and usher in evil.
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11 Years Ago
Thank you so much for the excellent review, at times it is too heart breaking innocent individuals h.. read moreThank you so much for the excellent review, at times it is too heart breaking innocent individuals have to be the victims of this process, take care
We are still barbaric in many ways we are the pups of the earth compared to many species one day we will grow up! Nice poem with heartfelt words!
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11 Years Ago
Thank you so much for the very positive review, we have to grow up, it is too late, so hard at times.. read moreThank you so much for the very positive review, we have to grow up, it is too late, so hard at times to see the innocent victims, the faces which have to glow like morning bright sun, becoming totally cloudy and melancholic is not at all helping none in any ways
At times I hail the barbarian..I have learned that civilization is a lie. Civilization is nothing more than the elite controlling all and the commoner is to sit down..shut their mouths and be ruled without the urge to fight back or seek liberty...at times...I want to be.."The Barbarian"
Enjoyed it,
Scotty
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thank you so much for the wonderful review, a simple casual conversation made me to write this poem,.. read moreThank you so much for the wonderful review, a simple casual conversation made me to write this poem, in a very simple two sentence conversation one person has no issue to denounce very casually one principle learned through out his life, totally surprised and when I compared few things I observed in the past, I felt like I have to spit these lines, take care
I am a writer and I used to write since I was nineteen years old. I grew up in a house with huge library. I read some of those books to be accurate I will say very few. I saw individuals reading day a.. more..