I may swim

Swimming alone is hard but carrying another person with you is more challenging to both lives

I will keep on swimming

You are so heavy and pulling me down

I may carry you as much as I can

As I love you so much and more

If comes a point where I lose consciousness

My hands may let you go

Promise I may carry you till then

Can you wake me if I lose my consciousness

Author's Note

will you swim alone

Reviews

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I loved where you went with this poem and how you made it:)))))))))))))) We can only hold on for so long , you speak of a divine love or a possible dear friend, I see it as a caring in all to be their in the mist when all pure and free. You speak a purpose a pose we all shall be:)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

[Linda alexander]

Thank you so much for the very positive review, I hope it is not only in writing, at times too hard to write in life not easy as cafe

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Your welcome:)))))))))))))))) I see u as a dear person so both:))))))))))))) I understand:))))))))))))) we do as we can and that is all we can do.

[Linda alexander]

Take care, my friend

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You too:)))))))))))))))) my friend:)

[Sami Khalil]

Amazing write and sentiments from a talented poet. That ending was out of this world...:).............

[Linda alexander]

Thank you so much for the review Sami, may be life boat come for rescue so both do not need to swim, will see, take care

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha...You are welcome...:)..............

[Linda alexander]

Take care..........

[Sami Khalil]

:).................