Loop

Loop

A Poem by Linda alexander
"

Society has norms and nomenclature, one needs to fit in to their loop for acceptance

"
Did not fit for their loop became an exclusion body 
So stayed out all these decades not even tried to get in
Now forced to get in to loop as an inclusion body
It is so thrilling to stay outside the loop and just watch

So free fearless and vision is way clearer than those in the loop
Love my comfortable loop created for me with all details
Yes this loop can accommodate me as a whole not as fractions
Of course way better than the loop society offered me

© 2014 Linda alexander


Author's Note

Linda alexander
inclusion or exclusion

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

I like this very much well put and progressed Linda:)Of course way better than the loop society offered me

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Linda alexander

11 Years Ago

At times even if we are not adolescent age group but adults have to rebellious not to cooperative wi.. read more
0000000000000000000000000000

11 Years Ago

well said:)))))))))))) your very welcome:) nite nite:) my friend
A powerful message on the norms of society and its expectance of us. Some fit in its norm and some refuse too. I take the good one and reject the old unwise ones. Excellent.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)...
Linda alexander

11 Years Ago

Take care mississippe, thank you so much for your time you take to read and review, really appreciat.. read more
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

:).........

Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

256 Views
2 Reviews
Rating
Added on April 29, 2014
Last Updated on April 29, 2014

Author

Linda alexander
Linda alexander

New Hyde Park, NY



About
I am a writer and I used to write since I was nineteen years old. I grew up in a house with huge library. I read some of those books to be accurate I will say very few. I saw individuals reading day a.. more..