Passion in sportsmanspirit

Slaughtered the love and ridiculed the heart

Kept on running in the wilderness

Years and decades marched with triumph 

Swam with dreams and tasted variant dry wines

The new rain opened eyes for something or nothing

The boat was at the same place still

The boat never moved not even an inch

Somehow seems like never untied the boat to be free

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

it sounds like the speaker was someone else's sport in love...and now the boat is not untied, and the speaker is tied to the feelings of rejection...a ridiculed heart will just keep on running..

there is so much feeling in this Linda...

i feel this poem because i have been there.

[Linda alexander]

Excellent review, when the reviews come way outstanding than the poem itself it is a real issue, the issue I deal at times

[Sami Khalil]

"Swam with dreams and tasted variant dry wines

The new rain opened eyes for something or nothing"

[Linda alexander]

Thanks a lot mississippe for your support in my writing, I could not read and comprehend few sentences at a stretch for a long time, getting better

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. You are welcome...Any time...:).................

[Sami Khalil]

Amazing title and poem. I feel the regrets in the poet's voice, the lost chances, the wasted dreams for nothing. The poet is trying to break free and enjoy the rest of her life in true bliss. Bravo...............

[Linda alexander]

Thanks a lot for the review Sami and the kind words, take care

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).....................