Real game of chess

Real game of chess

A Poem by Linda alexander

Looked around simply looked around
World is full of chess contestants
Minds with double and triple games
Well schemed dogma overfills

If every soul is transparent
May be every brain is outside the skull
All thinking is outwardly and clearer
The game might be way less complex

© 2014 Linda alexander


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Hmmmm....I thnk this one is about a lot more than chess. Souls are not transparent, are they? Life is full of strategic moves and sly machinations. This poem made me think a bit...which I enjoy. Lydi**

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Linda alexander

11 Years Ago

Well said dear poet, those who keen and good at it may advance faster, at the nutshell who really w.. read more
This is so true and beautiful. I love this poem. Thank you for sharing

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Linda alexander

11 Years Ago

Thanks again for reading, really glad you liked it, take care
A lovely poem and a good read, well done

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Linda alexander

11 Years Ago

Thanks a lot for the review, really glad you visited, take care
It seems all our lives we are making a strategy for something, cause without one we have no clue how to approach a situation…

If every soul is transparent
May be every brain is outside the skull

I just love those lines.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Linda alexander

11 Years Ago

Well said, Thanks a lot for the review, take care
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

11 Years Ago

You are most welcome.
chess is a thinking person's game...but when we play it in real life...it can be so transparent what our moves are and what they mean.

nice analogy here, Linda...

one of my favorites from you.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Linda alexander

11 Years Ago

Thanks a lot for the review and complement, take care friend

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Linda alexander
Linda alexander

New Hyde Park, NY



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I am a writer and I used to write since I was nineteen years old. I grew up in a house with huge library. I read some of those books to be accurate I will say very few. I saw individuals reading day a.. more..