Sayonara to thunderstorm

When thunderstorm leaves me

He promised me a beautiful rainbow

Yes to quench my life long dream

Never realized parting will be that fast

Yes friend I am way ahead of this game

I know for sure that day will come sooner 

Each day is a struggle to let it go but not

I am way ahead of this cruel game of farewell

Reviews

[Briana O'Connor]

Love the power in this one. A very great metaphorical piece of pure beauty.

[Linda alexander]

This poem some how really bothered me when i wrote it, thanks for the review

[Linda alexander]

I liked the way you engulfed life into your writing. Thunderstorms with rain here down under badly. South Australia does crops are fading away early this year.

This is B J's review I deleted it by mistake when thanking to the reviewer, after twelve hours night shift things similar to that can always happen,

[Lydia Shutter]

Great metaphor here. Empowering thoughts. I liked it a lot. Lydi**

[Linda alexander]

Thanks a lot for your visit and the review, so glad you liked it, take care

[Lydia Shutter]

You too, Linda.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

we need buckets to clean up after the storm... but also a bucket list to achieve before that final farewell..

great feeling of comfort from this...even though it is about a storm...

[Linda alexander]

Yes very true, at times so confused, take care

[Sami Khalil]

A sad but beautiful poem about the hardships of farewells when the parting is realized. Bravo......................

[Linda alexander]

Well said and so true, take care friend

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. You are welcome...:)...................

[Linda alexander]

Take care mississippe

[Sami Khalil]

You too Ganges river...:).....

[Linda alexander]

Wow, so you know about sindhu, ganges and brahmaputhra three great rivers, there is a fourth one saraswathy which is believed travels underground

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you for the info...:)......................