When my path ended

Drained out souls still cement the relations

When my path ended it never marked the end of my journey

There were miles and miles of new trails I could generate

The trails matching to my treasured dreams and desires

They were the branded ones worthy to strike heavens 

Did I really have my tools ready for new trajectory

Yes friend the impulse I extracted each time I fell

I fell so many times but walked again with renewed spirit

The hidden schema behind  new voyage was the failure itself

Reviews

[B.J]

So true to life challenges.. Well done

[Linda alexander]

Thanks BJ for your visit and kind words, this site especially few writers including the writers who left the cafe helped me a lot to grow in writing, take care

[B.J]

This site has helped me as well. Overcoming life challenges is something we should hold dear to our heart.

[Linda alexander]

Move on is the best practical policy

[paul sal.....]

Life is a long road,one can stay in one place and still learn and Sail, I wish you luck, trying to figure IT out

[Linda alexander]

Thanks a lot for the review , well said, take care

[Briana O'Connor]

Great message in this one. The way you expressed the moral of never giving up was inspiring! Thank you for sharing!

[Linda alexander]

We need to look around to see exactly what we supposed to see and it may tell us there is no real point in giving up in any circumstances, at times those who give up are the most talented ones too, thanks for the review and kind words, take care

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I like this gives strength to the weaker points in life to rise up:)

[Linda alexander]

Thanks a lot for the review, I was weak for years which really was my strength, proud to be what I am weak and strong at the same time

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Your welcome Linda:)

[Linda alexander]

Take care friend

[Lydia Shutter]

It at first you don't succeed, you must try again. A poem filled with hope. Very uplifting. You might want to change "Did I really had my tools" to "Did I really have my tools" to make it grammatically correct. Good work. Lydi*

[Linda alexander]

Thanks a lot for the review and the help, it is so true you use it or lose it, I said goodbye to literary world almost twenty two years, great reminder, I can not even write in malayalam without spelling mistakes, the very language I used to handle almost 16 years, take care

[Brittany Defranco]

Journey of life, you make paths, footsteps that guide yourself and others that you meet.
Great poem :)

[Linda alexander]

I started believing in it lately, some of the things I write I won't practice but this one I have a medium urge to practice, thanks for the visit and the review

[Sami Khalil]

A new name, a nae season and a new path by a renewed spirit when failure is the past. A splendid poem...:)....................

[Sami Khalil]

I see now. You are welcome...:)....................

[Linda alexander]

Take care, Sami

[Sami Khalil]

Take care Pouline....:)........