Who really directs

Why I do write this poem

What guides me and leads me

Do I have sense of direction

Does the supreme play a role in our goals

Sun rays raise in east to set in the west

The stars travel fore ever to reach earth

The waves of ocean voyage to kiss the land

The cozy moon light aims for lover's heart

Soft tendril of runner plant senses branch to climb

Cats aim for birds when they arrive at tree branches

Laughing springs flee for the river at mountain side

Where is my sense of direction I really wander and wonder

Author's Note

Do we need to have sense of direction in our day to day sweating

Reviews

[Adam Adams]

"Sun rays raise in east to set in the west..."

This one line contains the whole universe in few letters. You spoke very well through this line. Even the day gets started with the beginning of sun-rays & it, of course, gets ended with the same rays... in guise of sun-set. So... "Who really directs?" No one, but the oozing appeal of moon & the smashing rays of sun both're enough to direct the heart in disguise of dappling shades of new-days in everyone's life. Nice imagery! Great job!

[Linda alexander]

Thanks a lot for the beautiful review and visit, liked the perception of yours, take care

[wordman]

it`s almost like an orchestra

[Linda alexander]

Thanks for your kind words, take care, but it is still a genuine question of mine who leads me and to where exactly

[Basu Gupta]

I attempted on this topic much earlier but could not come up with something.
Your piece do gave a direction what should I really write now.
Excellent words n' piece altogether.
Thanks for sharing

[Linda alexander]

Thanks a lot for the review and kind words, glad it helped you, take care

[Basu Gupta]

You too....

[Sami Khalil]

Your poems are philosophical and well appreciated. You raise some good wondering and wandering...Bravo.........

[Linda alexander]

Thanks a lot for the review and kind words, really appreciate for your time to read my writing, take care

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure. Any time....:)........

[jacob erin-cilberto]

"i wander and wonder"---
yes, as poets, that is exactly what we do...
and often we ask ourselves...why do i write? is there purpose?

what will remain of all of tihs when i am gone?

many valid questions raised in this write.

[Linda alexander]

Thanks a lot for the review and the visit, you write as you are talented for sure which is clear by your most unique metaphors in poetry, your writing at times above my reach, Take care