Black clouds

The dark clouds in my sky so undying

I do see pretty rainbows in your sky

Of course I am too jealous of you

It may continue until we both get same sky

I did not choose my sky by myself

Fate played a big role too

My perception colored it different

My gaze at closed door pushed me deeper down

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

wow, this is really a good piece (as i see it) dealing with envy...and one feeling sorry for herself...fate was unkind to me...

and yet...maybe the other person just worked harder to get that rainbow...

and it is doubtful both will get the same sky.

i like this..

[Linda alexander]

Thanks a lot for the review, really glad you liked it, hopefully the sky with rainbow will be mine soon

[wordman]

but envy sometimes turns in to great inspiration

[Linda alexander]

Yes of course envy can be transformed to dreams, aspirations and goals which is way healthier, but some how this candidate in the poet simply wants to stay with envy, thanks a lot for the review, take care

[wordman]

you are welcome

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Very deep and well written. You are a great one...:).................

[Linda alexander]

Thanks a lot for the review , God only knows how I came to writing area, take care

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. You are welcome...:).......................