Some people are happiest in the midst of turmoil because they feel better once they have negotiated the difficult twists and turns. Dreaming is not a bad thing...sometimes dreams do come true. Easier to cling to a dream than a storm if you ask me. Very good poem, Linda. Lydi**
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Well said and absolutely true, clinging to a storm is not all smart but at times what happens is not.. read moreWell said and absolutely true, clinging to a storm is not all smart but at times what happens is not at all the amiable way, may be everything has own reasons even is invisible to our own eyes, thanks a lot for review
Sometimes, the heart really seems to be so lost and confused in love; inside the enigma of life. It finds itself trapped; caged ... shackled by love / visions of unfazed thoughts. You express you true feelings in words... nicely pen'd up. Well done!
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
Thanks a lot for the visit and the review, well said, losing ourselves is not fun but worth it
dreams may be the real thing and all the other stuff that goes on around the world is a bad dream, it may be the only logical explanation for the maddness...................
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
Wow! I knew for sure my friend will have the exact and logical answer, thanks a lot for reading, tak.. read moreWow! I knew for sure my friend will have the exact and logical answer, thanks a lot for reading, take care Paul
Some people are happiest in the midst of turmoil because they feel better once they have negotiated the difficult twists and turns. Dreaming is not a bad thing...sometimes dreams do come true. Easier to cling to a dream than a storm if you ask me. Very good poem, Linda. Lydi**
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Well said and absolutely true, clinging to a storm is not all smart but at times what happens is not.. read moreWell said and absolutely true, clinging to a storm is not all smart but at times what happens is not at all the amiable way, may be everything has own reasons even is invisible to our own eyes, thanks a lot for review
i dream too, Linda and i long for peace---but i seem to just run into one worry after another....
and that peace is hard to find...writing is an outlet that really balances me..
it is the thunderstorm of ideas i like to chase.
i really like this poem.
jacob
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thanks a lot for the review am really glad you liked it, I came to writing very random manner, did n.. read moreThanks a lot for the review am really glad you liked it, I came to writing very random manner, did not even know this site is for writers, it literally helped me a lot to balance but did not fix all my issues.
"I am confused all I yearned is only a mirage
It is getting me so hard as I dream t a lot
If dreams are real like any concrete facts
I am floating in fantasy of dreams and reality"
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thanks a lot Sami, may be the distance between dreams and reality may vanish soon and all my dreams.. read moreThanks a lot Sami, may be the distance between dreams and reality may vanish soon and all my dreams will come true like magic even without working for it, can not wait, take care
I am a writer and I used to write since I was nineteen years old. I grew up in a house with huge library. I read some of those books to be accurate I will say very few. I saw individuals reading day a.. more..