Untainted

Born free in this free world to live free

The shackles self made or machine made for whom

Not for me I swear and swear again

Pick it if you choose break it if you feel

Born free in this free world to live free

My fears and insecurities growing like wild fire

Will it consume me in my path to live free

Assuage life's luxuries if you choose or shackle your self

Author's Note

life is often lived for nonsense

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

Sometimes, we shackle ourselves with negativity and sour attitude. We waste our happiness that we deserve and can achieve on silly things that are only in our minds. The ones we think matter to us , we find out they don't care but about themselves. Even some family members are like that. You write wisely...:::))))

[Linda alexander]

Thanks sami for the positive review, so hard for me to believe I am still in this site and writing, if few of the writers in this site did not support my writing most likely I would have stopped writing. The best part is that I can write without rules of writing as I have no clue about those hahaha.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. You are welcome and appreciated. ....:::))))

[paul sal.....]

Shackles are made by the greedy or the self absorbed, freedom loving people have to figure out a way to help them see the light, and survive the effort...eye opening writing!

[Linda alexander]

Thanks a lot for the visit and positive review, take care the ketch up man who tries to put sunlight in side the pocket, you write so good

[Sami Khalil]

Lydia had summed it up marvelously. So true and well expressed. As always, and excellent write....)))

[Linda alexander]

Thanks a lot Sami for the visit and the review, Sami, Jacob, Jack, Chris Vaillaincourt, silverton,lydia and few other writers helped me immensely grow even if some of you know I have only medical knowledge as a background, appreciate every one's help, take care

[Sami Khalil]

You are most welcome. ...:)))

[Lydia Shutter]

We do shackle ourselves with responsibilities and opinions of others. We feel insecure when there is no reason for us to feel that way. Only we can break free. Empowering words. Lydi**

[Linda alexander]

A very positive and beautiful review, some how community or family who supposed to bring best in you may suppress our growth, at times we accelerate without self reflection or insight which is even worse. Thanks a lot for the review.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

our fears and insecurities will definitely imprison us if we let them...

it is up to us to break the shackles...

nicely done.

j.

[Linda alexander]

Thanks a lot for the visit and positive review, I am so glad I am among great writers, take care