The loop of real life

Stagnant water and  lifeless living all in the loop

Story telling to the pillows also in the loop

The living room center table made of wood still in

I boldly say I am in the loop with perfections only

Here in the loop we make bubbles just to break away

We also make dreams and goals out of thinnest reality

We live here happily enjoying whatever comes in our way

We still calling you come inside and live happily foreever

Reviews

[emmajoy]

Life is what it is and we're rolled up in it, best we can, best we do,.. the loops carries us on.. and on.. and on.. happily forever.

Sweet words, Linda, finely put together for readers to juggle with their own thinking.

[Linda alexander]

Thanks a lot for the visit and brilliant review, I believe in this universal loop all living and non living things are inclusions only with it's own perfection, I can be wright or wrong still that statement is an inclusion I think.

[Sami Khalil]

"We also make dreams and goals out of thinnest reality
We live here happily enjoying whatever comes in our way"

[Linda alexander]

Wow! mississippe reviewed my writing second time too, great, thanks sami

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome Cleopatra of the Nile...:).........................

[Sami Khalil]

In the loop, out of the loop, making loops. Some seek perfection and some seek chaos. Some live happy and others sad. Some are invited to participate and others are marginalized. Wonderful what you stated...:)..................

[Linda alexander]

The real loop there is only inclusions not even one exclusions, thanks for the visit and review, take care

[Sami Khalil]

Take care. You are welcome inclusively...:)..................