At the life's crosswalks

Which emotions rule me in this crosswalk?

I fear of those who can kill my soul.

Which rainbows send those rays of hope?

How long I have to wait at this cross walk.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

Good questions. Keep following that ray of hope. Emotions can rule indeed.

[JessyJacob]

hi, nice expression of heart feelings, i am also at the same crosswalk, waiting.
I liked the last line, which clearly expresses the frustration, cant go away but just wait, but for how long?

-jesssy jacob.

[Arundass TP]

Nice shortie. Good work.

[Linda alexander]

Thanks a lot for the positive review. This site helped me a lot. I have few great mentors in this site.