The Past

Letting go of the past seems hard it's true, but letting go

of the past is the right thing to do

The past has good memories , and sometimes bad 

you may be left happy and at other times sad

Things happen for a reason no matter

what the case may be

Except what happened in the past, and

move on and be free...

Author's Note

I know it's a grammar mistake with the last line but for some reason I can't change it... accept not except

Reviews

[Linda alexander]

The present is the only thing you can do something, you need to bury the past without hesitance, future also can be a illusion, who knows you will there in future to make dreams come true, so enjoy every second as if you enjoying every single drop of your most favorite drink, villain is memories in the past, do not forget that too.

[Jeannear]

so true linda thank you very much for that comment I appreciate it very much

[Levi Levin]

Lots of truth to this piece. Great job!

[Jeannear]

Thank you for the comment

[Levi Levin]

Your welcome

[Gee]

Enjoyed this and the truth stated.
Should except in the last line be accept ??
:)

[Jeannear]

Thank you and you're right :) I wrote this 5yrs ago lol didn't even proofread it... I'll make that change

[Natalie Dieudonne]

A direct poem with very true words.

I like it

[Jeannear]

thank you :)

[Great Aunt Astri]

A very pleasant reassuring poem .. thank you

[Jeannear]

no thank you for reading it :)

[Shnookums]

This is a very good point made in this poem. ^-^ Nice work

[Jeannear]

thank you for that comment

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

Nice write~ THE past is hard to let go of at times, but it belongs where it is--in the past--not the present.

[Jeannear]

yes very true thank you

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

You are welcome~

[SAYED THANGAL]

good poem and a nice message conveyed , as past is the continuation of present, be well in the present so as to get the best memory on past.

[Jeannear]

so true.....thank you for the comment

[h d e rushin]

welcome jeannear......I see we are from the same city..Beautiful Detroit...This is where you
belong. Here you can "move on and be free".

dana

[Jeannear]

thank you dana and yes that is very true indeed

[Sami Khalil]

"Things happen for a reason no matter

what the case may be




Except what happened in the past, and

move on and be free..."

[Jeannear]

thank you sami :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).......................