Now what?

Now what?

A Poem by paul sal.....

                                 I will not, cannot,walk past a tree 
                                 Without taking an unconscious notice.
                                 Usually, trees and their brethren,
                                 Take on a paramount meaning in my life
                                 Yet, I cannot reach for the sun like a tree.
                                 I cannot fly like a bird
                                 I cannot make diligent strides to make a
                                 Home in the earth like the ant and
                                 his co-inhabitants.    
                                 What am I do do?
                                 I want to become part of their world.             
                                 Must death be the only way?
                                 No!
                                 I must devise a way to become literally
                                 Part of their world while maintaining
                                 the ability to realize it.
                                            
                                        Why? 

                                              They don't!

                                                       Now what? 

© 2014 paul sal.....


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Yet, I cannot reach for the sun like a tree.
I cannot fly like a bird
I cannot make diligent strides to make a
Home in the earth like the ant and
his co-inhabitants.
What am I do do?
Excellent write, very thought provoking, but not sure how exactly realizing and becoming part of the earth, still poem made me to take small steps for it, impressed, congrats, take care

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Dee
wow...I so get this! I am a tree & nature freak.....wow is all I can say again....i GET THIS! I GET YOU!

BUT I AGREE...NOW WHAT? I am going to get real quiet this spring and just listen as I smell the good earth when it relaxes from its winter stillness.......then try and hear what the earth is really saying...this may trip me up to what the trees are saying as well.

Posted 11 Years Ago


paul sal.....

11 Years Ago

sounds like a poem to me,write it!
Thought-provoking--especially the last three lines. Ah, to be a tree--or a bird--nicely done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


paul sal.....

11 Years Ago

thanks, i'm waiting for the snow to melt........

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paul sal.....
paul sal.....

Brentwood, NY



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Just a simple human wondering why we live in such turmoil and working in a small way to make it better....I like cats stevens, mozaart, neil young, beethoven, harry chapin, ernest chausson, passenger,.. more..