TELL ME

tell me if it's not enough
tell me when tears run by,
I will always stay close to you
                                .......just tell me,

tell me when you're in pain
when world of smile
                                 .....you can't regain


reality is true
still waiting for you
if smiles revealed without me
               ......just tell me
UNSPOKEN.

-musicfunk-

Reviews

[Japanese Cherry]

Nice job, keep up the good work, i enjoyed reading

[Sasha]

I am being blown away by your poems.

[shunik]

=]

[judith106]

This poem is awesome and I feel like it was written for the day I had today. Very real.

[shunik]

thanks
=]

[ForeverNever]

Enjoy the silence

[Max_E_Stone]

I like both of your pictures as well as the poem. There's nothing I would change about it. Awesome all the way!

[Calibaster]

Awesome! keep up the good work!

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Great work

[Krista Weiss]

Really good poem!! Love it! :)

[TheJordBaker]

awesome, truthful, powerful. nice work!!

[Baby Ricochet]

Nice one