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Jewelena
Me telling the reader about a girl I have a huge lesbian crush on.
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Writing Deleted
Reviewed by Thomas W Case
1 Day Ago
This poem lives in the tension between desire and restraint. The repetition feels intentional, mirroring frustration and emotional distance, while the final line lands hard with earned self-awareness... more..
Bitcoin/USDT Recovery Company
Reviewed by Atlast Turner
22 Hours Ago
I am writing this to express my sincere gratitude and to share my experience with Wizard James Recovery. After falling victim to a scam/technical error that resulted in the loss of 1.9 BTC, I felt com.. more..
TRUST'S GORGEOUS CAGE
Reviewed by JayG
1 Day Ago
This has meaning for you, because you're aware of the things that drove you to write it. But you never identify them, just b***h about them happening in terms so vague as to be meaningless to the read.. more..
ATTENTION SPAN
Reviewed by Lorry
1 Day Ago
Your title turned out to be very prophetic Vol, seeing as it thought you were warning the Mediterranean by misreading it as attention Spain!
You are of course correct in that we no longer have.. more..
Vide Cor Tuum
Reviewed by Betty Hermelee
1 Day Ago
A conglomeration of many humans and their life cycle as the stars move, so do we...enter new horizons... time moves on and so do we..we die, then sprouts another generation...the universe is constantl.. more..
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