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Jessy, I read several of your "chapters" and I am confused. First, I read your first "chapter," "Heart, Soul, and Dreams" and there are links to both the "next chapter" and to the "previous chapter." But chapters are sections of books, presented in a strict format, and the reader goes from chapter "1" through to the end. The "story" goes in a logical form for the reader to both understand and enjoy. That is not the case here, and I am afraid that, first, you will scare away potential readers by calling your poems "chapters." Most folks here don't want or have time to read an entire book, so when they see something is a "chapter," they move on to someone else's page. Second, I am loathe to leave a review of your individual pieces because if they are indeed part of a book, I don't know where I should start and I can't comprehend your "story" without knowing where to begin and how to move through it.
Then there is the AI. You are obviously using an AI program not only to translate your words, but to CRAFT your writing in poems that rhyme. But YOU did not craft those rhymes, the AI did. So then, who is the author? There is nothing wrong with using a translator so that others will understand you. But you simply cannot use that translator to "build" your poetry -- because it is no longer yours.
Next is this person, "Murugan," apparently your "husband" who also claims to be "your god" as well. What extraordinary gall! Then he says you "don't listen that why I f**k with other step mom's." How incredibly insulting and revolting to post something like that to ANYONE, but to one's WIFE!!??" I would be so steaming mad! Maybe you must put up with this in your country, maybe it's something traditional I don't understand. But since I have this forum at this moment, I must say that I would BLOCK that cruel, extremely rude A*****E so he cannot continue to desecrate your pages.
I hope you gain something of value from the things I have left you here, Jessy. Good luck to you.
FD
Posted 4 Months Ago
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4 Months Ago
Hi, nice thoughts of you, I just created book, each chapter is unique what I feel to write about and.. read moreHi, nice thoughts of you, I just created book, each chapter is unique what I feel to write about and I tried this would be better way to organise in one profile name, book is just not one story about. I do nowadays keep on writing when I get time in office. Reg murugan, I guess he is my beloved, I just left and you know I am a bit smart I didn't delete nor block, because these are proofs they can realise later. My mom used to say record my father's talk when he gets drunk and talks all the things and scoldings..to make him listen what he said in night. . I just that intentionally but I do want people know sometimes how they behave and it is pretty much normal to me too, when it gets hurt I can't stop what I want to say, but later when I see I think I need to behave. When things go wrong we couldn't control I get hyper seeing things . I am not that hyper but few things are coming across in me, I don't how ..
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4 Months Ago
I don't how to write with imagine, I just put my thoughts as they come, I felt when AI could make it.. read moreI don't how to write with imagine, I just put my thoughts as they come, I felt when AI could make it flow with imaginary why can't I use that, I am not competing for any contest. I just write thoughts which I feel to write just to inspire or forget pain in heart for my dearest people. If that I am interested in writing better way I need to spend time. Nowadays my brain is sensitive than before, I just want to lead my life enough of this what is going on inside me, people are hurting me in real because they can do better I am done fixing my brain because people are intentionally hurting in real, this was closed long time . I feel normal. It's been 25 yrs I am having trouble and pain in my head I have handled myself my family was always there for me including who really worry about me ..
Thank you for your reply
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4 Months Ago
Now I feel terrible for my comments -- and yet, not. I am not condemning you, but trying to teach. H.. read moreNow I feel terrible for my comments -- and yet, not. I am not condemning you, but trying to teach. However, I do condemn the use of AI to construct poetry; and when that poem rhymes, I doubly condemn it because the author very obviously did not create that poem and cannot claim it as their own. I will not apologize for that. I also stand by what I said about your husband. And leaving his comments right there at the top of your page insinuates that you are giving it worth. At least, please, leave your own review of him below his filthy remarks. Please. Unless your creed or religion do not allow it.
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4 Months Ago
I don't know what I should say to my husband and I love my husband, I know I irritated him when he w.. read moreI don't know what I should say to my husband and I love my husband, I know I irritated him when he was trying to get date for me, I hurted him and never spoke to him, I knew he was just very young then, now he is hurting me threatening me that he will sleep with others and I wait for him if he thinks he is missing me.i know my gurus told me he loves me alot so I am not arguing with him ... It really hurts me when ladies try to sleep with him but what I can say ...I kept my door open till how late he comes to me and we stay together as wife and husband...
Ok I will drop review with respect to your word ..
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4 Months Ago
Definitely I am learning with AI the poetic tone it will take some more time to write better. I have.. read moreDefinitely I am learning with AI the poetic tone it will take some more time to write better. I have two issues vocabulary and poetic rhythm.
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